commentary


A lot of people requested that I do a short scene from Lex's
point of view, to better illustrate what the heck he was thinking for
this whole story.  This got me going on the whole "Director's Cut" idea
and I came up with 3 separate commentaries in the end:


Clark and Lex comment on
the Tuna Incident Scene -- a commentary
a la Mystery Science Theatre




meet folks

Lex's story of what it was like,
the first time he met the in-laws.




celery salt
My commentary on
the celery salt thing



outline

The Original Plot Outline for Omiai



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