O-let saa-nut mut
hauk-ko-maan hen-ke-ä-ni,
O-len sa-na-ton.
(You've made me
lose my breath,
I'm speechless)
- missu
Haiku sucks but not this
story which is so hot that my
eyes crossed half-way through.
- echoskeleton
"I want you naked"
Hot, emotional, and true
I love your writing
- mindyfromohio
You must be psychic
For I was just thinking that
Life is so unfair
That more Omiai
Would not be posted until
Tomorrow morning
And I needed
More Omiai to get through
This cruel rainy day
Behold refreshing
My livejournal friends list
My prayers are answered
Thank you so, so much
For this bonus bit, so hot
so sweet, so touching
- pun
Smut is very nice,
in the afternoon or in
morning or nighttime
- vampsarecool
i'm not crying i'm
not but it's so intimate
and beautiful that
maybe i am just
a little. "you trust me" he
said. "love me" he meant.
my heart aches for them
sex so hot, sharing themselves
their hearts and bodies
fabulous chapter
of this wonderful story
thank you, thank you, wow
- tynantblue0162
Shit, that was hot and
I am breathless from it now
hope you post tonight
- juno501
the story is good
the sex is even hotter
i really loved it
- serafina20
Oh render me, in
iambic pentameter,
puddled so much like
open-ended screams,
melted honey-soft pleasure,
breaths that go in one.
You weave the Clex like
their destiny spun wholecloth;
for that I love you.
- permetaform
Naked together
yet cloaked in a silence
Until there is trust
Love revealed by trust
to one unused to either
one offering all
- kyanoswolf
I am LJ lazy
Real life is being a bitch
But then there is this
I love Omiai
I do not say it enough
but I really do
- jeannie81
Yay. The Love. Lex
is so gone, in Love. Awww! The
Hot Sex was good too.
- ladydey
Qué bella escena
has escrito; íntima
fusión de almas.
What a beautiful scene have you written, intimate coupling of souls.
- smallcondo
OH MY ICON USED
LEX AND CLARK THE BEST SEX YET
SO GOOD WONDERFUL
You Also Used The
Omiai Snuggle Bunnies
Icon Made By Me!
- laurelqueen
Lex and Clark so hot,
I just wet myself in lab.
How do I stand up?
- the_cashew
Lex Clark Lex Clark Lex
a long moment poised sublime
Clark Lex Clark Lex Clark
- emrinalexander
Outside the sun shines
and my heart is inflated
with joy this to read.
What a connection
they have made with each other,
to trust without doubt.
And Lex clearly loves
Clark best of all on this earth
though he can't speak it.
You have made me smile
and brightened a tired day;
for this I thank you.
- muse_attack
Thank you for the great
distraction from my exam
which is in 2 hours
Omiai should be
updated daily into
all eternity
The hot!boy!sex is
a balm to my poor exam
ravaged mind, Katy.
- chasethecat
Touch of silky skin
Opening for hot hard flesh
Trust and love slip in
Teasing, beckoning
I succumb to printed words.
After, joyous smiles.
- mahaliem
this, good solid proof
that being a livejournal whore
will pay off lots, yay!
Rose Emily rocks.
I will bake you cookies cause,
I suck at feedback.
- zebracake267
O Canada - yay!
'Frickin Alberta' snow snow!
Make Rose write more pron!
- briesas
Must be destiny
certainly, when trust and love
are just afterthoughts
Nakna, sårbara.
Så upptäcker de att de
litar på varann.
Naked vulnerable. In this way they discover that they trust each other.
- _sail_
Ich saß auf einen Rosenbaum
dachte an Omiai
und hatte einen schönen Traum
In Alberta wird es weiterschneien
und Rose-Emily wird weiterschreiben
bis ins nächste Jahrtausend hinein
- mariaparanoid
Der Schnee fällt weich.
Plötzliches Sonnenscheinüberraschen.
Denver kann nicht entscheiden.
Das ein dann andere.
Egal was sie besser.
Schreiben Sie oder geben Sie keine Festlichkeiten!
Ein wenig feucht meine Augen
Ein Stoß der Freude so süß, getöntes Blau
Mein Herz hält sie nahe
(Somewhat moist my eyes.
A burst of joy so sweet, tinged blue.
My heart holds them close.)
- graysong
Condom, lube, Clark, Lex...
Gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, gay, gay...
Dude, I'm in trouble.
- iykwim
a diva, but I am her
willing haiku bitch.
more, more, I panted.
Anything you want, just give
me my fic fix, babe.
- thistle90
Clinical to sweet
Trust gives surcease to the pain
Omiai, don't end!
- nitidus
I wait, impatient
your story brings me joy and
I hope for more porn
- elanorelle
Like Lex, I am torn,
opened -- the brink of something
strange, new, and unknown
- garryowen
All I can say is
That I am so grateful that
I didn't read at work.
Hot hot hot hot hot
I'm a big puddle of goo
I need a shower
"You trust me," said Lex
Realizing that he loves
his farmboy husband.
- dolimir
Loved them together
Absolutely the greatest
Just love how you write!!!!
- lynn221
Lovely, frabjous smut
With our naked Lex and Clark
Holds hostage my brain
Clark may be easy
Alpha Lex is very guh
Yea, oh yea, there's sex
Something quiet here
So painful, wracking, fearful
Must be love somehow
- princeless
sweet and hot, the boys
laid bare (heh). And I wonder
what's gonna spoil it.
Love how your request
prompts so many other tongues
unexpectedly
It's a long time since
I've counted on my fingers
Quite this much. The end.
- lokii_lokii
oh my fucking god
katy this is just too hot
please write more right now
- burnitbackwards
halfway through the goods
my mother-in-law called me
god must hate me lots
banged my head on desk
took phone off hook, locked the door
much safer that way
my god that was guh!
you made clark and lex have sex
for that i haiku
- quinnponders
Gratuitous sex,
the very best kind of sex
Damn I love these boys.
oh rose_emily
you writing is fabulous
keep up the great work.
- sarahjane12
"You trust me," he said.
Hearts break open, only one
Of them is Lex's
Fucked out, blissed out, happy
Arch enemies? Who needs 'em?
rose_emily rocks
- lola425
The more I recieve
The more that I need to see
This fic completes me
Once again it was
Bea-u-ti-ful beyond words
Your boys are lovely
But their trust scares me
There's trouble brewing, I fear
Tell him the truth, Clark!
- laciudad
Curses at hammers
All recontextualized
Yet Clark still got banged
So lucky for
When Lex got married he got
A beautiful slut
- linabean
Sue Johannsen says
use lube and fingers. Way to
follow her advice.
- black_siren
Real, but still so hot
I feel my insides melting
like fat-free butter
- superlurk
sous l'abri de la
confiance, leur amour est
tendre, mais fragile.
- morceau
Oh my god! This rocks!
I don't think I've ever seen
more brilliant comments!
Your whole friends list swells
with talent. Into my LJ
memories it goes!
Clark's smile. Lex's control
lost. not fucking. laid open.
hearts bared and in love.
---------
Mujhe lagtaa hai
ki unko shant dilon mai
ek vicar aaya
Muhn prem ko pehchan-
-ne se pehle sharir ne
prem ker diya hai
---------Roughly Translated---------
It seems to me
that a thought came into their quiet hearts
before the mind recognizes love,
the body has given it away
- betrue
is wonderful for emotions held
deeply released carefully, hopefully, to the one
who is trusted and loves
- amber_32random
Oh my! Lex fucked Clark!
That was incredibly hot!
I tremble in awe!
- mlleelizabeth
hot sweet and perfect
this story is fantastic
oh how i'll miss it
why can't this become
a universe of it's own?
please write more more more
i write this haiku
only 'cause your skill is so
inspirational
- ladybugginout
Smallville at its best
Clark, Lex, love, lube and plot-ness
My one addiction
- jbslash
oh, holy god, this
was so fucking hot. i will
have sweet dreams tonight.
- fizzabith
fingers caress skin
hot tangle of naked limbs
hearts fall softly
~~~~~~
fiery passionate boys
travel far on their journey
searching for love
~~~~~~
alien, alone, lost
impossible as haiku
for rose_emily
- kilronan
i should be writing
my research paper right now
but this is better
- untappedbeauty
Those limericks that
were suggested to you
are looking real good
Cause haiku is hard,
yo, and this pretty much sucks
But it's thought that counts
However, Miss Rose_,
Emily you must now know
the depth of the love
Omiai rocks our-
Socks! And it's blatantly clear
What everyone wants
That Lex!Clark!sex!guh
It's the order of the day
Cleverly served up
By our very own
genius, whose real name is Katy
desperation, here
I have reached the end
Of this Omiai Epic
And am ready to-
Kill your muse, betrue!
For the horros of haiku
Inflicted on us!
It's really quite sad
That I've written 8 stanzas
And not said a thing
About the wonders
Of this chapter of Om-yai
That's just so, so- GUH.
- selectclientele
O, amor viris
cinaedus calidus, est
similis rimae.
(Latin...sort of:
Oh, the hot manlove,
it is like crack.)
- emungere
Oh my, Omiai
Your Lex and Clark together
poetry made flesh.
Mere words can't express
the depth of my affection
for your epic fic.
I can't wait to read
what's next for the lovers
Lois, and the Kents.
A timely tale
is something I admire
(especially with smut).
In fact, I admit
I had to read it over.
(then go be alone)
- hyperfocused
love glistens like tears
slipping across the surface
pulling them under
hiding from the world
absolution found in skin
sanity in touch
trust and love endure
during the quiet moments
universe on pause
hidden paradise
fleeting moment promises
things still left unsaid
emotions tremble
quicksilver doubts multiply
bittersweet ending
- virtualinsomnia
The answer to life,
The universe, and all, is:
Trust -- love from this grows.
Awareness blooms now
Limbs and hearts intertwining
Making Truth from Sham.
Omiai once more
Shows Two building together
One life much richer.
But Threat still looming --
What plans the angry Lucas?
How much does he know?
- mary_alice
kono hanashi
suteki de suki da
zutto yomu ne
(I'll always read this story because it's nice and I love it)
doumo da yo
kore kaite kure-
te tanoshimi
(thank you for writing this, I'm enjoying it)
aku setia
menanti sambungannya
terlalu asyik
(I wait patiently for the next chapter, because I'm too caught up)
- serabut
the trust had been laid
bare. opening the core of
these two wounded men
open more than they
had been before. this was theirs.
a place all their own
- fannishange
Look, the daily fix.
hot tangling of long limbs. Guh!
this part rocked big time.
Hot Clex makes my day.
wish your WiP could last forever.
too few parts left to enjoy.
- elsmoka
When Lex talks trust I
just melt; God, the sex was hot...
wonder what comes next.
- yavannauk
Evidement vous etes
La plus cruel ecrivain
Dans tout le grand monde.
C'est parce que vous, chere,
Me donnez une histoire si
Belle mais si suspens.
- nataliadarimini
Why are they so lost
When we all know that they are
Wanting each other?
**
I am getting lost
Mesmerized by their passion
Can every part be sex?
- strangefancy
Needle in my vein
Omiai is worth that pain
Junkie 'til the end.
Skronking, finally!
Wonderful Rose Emily.
Love's snuggle bunnies.
I suck at Haiku
But I'll do it anyway.
For this post today.
- nuptse
Is beyond me now
They trust each other, yes! I
love Clex & Omiai
- astrea9562
Trust laid bare, laying
Out on top of secrets like
sheets. They catch your legs
And make it hard to get up,
but it's too cold to stay here.
(this is actually a tonka - 5-7-5-7-7.)
- cjandre
